Hey! Congrats on winning the Writer's Cramp!

This is a WDC Power Reviewers Review!

Please remember that these are just my thoughts, at the end of the day whatever you decide is the right answer!

Initial hook: love it! good of you to go above and beyond with the oxymoron usage

Storyline: a lover's poem

Atmosphere/Tone/Mood: happy to be alone (together) but then somehow get's sad by the end

What I liked: the creativity of multiple common oxymorons

A few suggestions I had:

(Original quotes will be in black, any changes or suggestions I'll make in blue to make it clear)

Just a hopeless, optimistic,/fool, lured
maybe consider revising this punctuation, only two adjectives, no need to separate fool...maybe, not clear on that but it reads funny

A few parting comments...
Good job!

Hope this helped! Great job on a great piece of readable art!!!

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