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My Psalm Open in new Window. [E]
Someone once suggested: Write a psalm of your own.
by ruwth Author Icon
Review of My Psalm  Open in new Window.
Review by A*Monaing*Faith Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Please remember that these are just my thoughts, at the end of the day whatever you decide is the right answer!

*Reading* Initial hook: very nice! a great method of reflection and communing with God

*Butterflyb* Atmosphere/Tone/Mood: reverent and honest

*Suitheart* What I liked: how you made it your own while maintaining the flow of a Psalm

A few parting comments...
can't really suggest changes because it's such a personal expression of self, for clarity sake maybe revise the use of so many ellipses and use other punctuation instead

Hope this helped! Great job on a great piece of readable art!!!

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