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*MugBr* Title: Painting Jealousy

*MugG* Author: Vulture

*MugLP* Reviewed by: KerrieAnnS

*MugLV* First Impression: I had to read this a few times because I couldn't quite grasp the context. But it is the abstract nature of this poem that makes it intriguing.

*MugV* What I liked most: The use of colours meshing together, building up on top of each other, weighing the paper down until it breaks. Jealousy eats away at people and I love its comparison with the colours in this poem, especially as you have paired each colour with a description that lends itself to jealous emotion.

*MugR* Suggestions: I'm still unsure about the road signs. Throughout I have an image of a canvas struggling under the weight of emotion depicted in colours, each with their own individual nature. But the road signs don't fit for me. But that could be because I am interpreting the poem in a way you hadn't intended.

*MugO* Conclusion: A very creative and imaginative poem.

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