This is my review for "Invalid Item" , written by bonzo1964.

Disclaimer: The following words are my personal opinions and interpretations. These are meant to encourage the writer and his/her readers. Please, read carefully.

Hi, Daddy's Girl! Your poem reminds me of school days when the weather turned cold, in the twenties and
thirties. Yes, all the leaves were brown and covered with snow on rare occasions. I loved the looks of snow on the ground. It was just as peaceful as the blossoming in springtime.

You seem to be someone who pays attention to nature. Someone who feels and smells the cold. I am curious to see what poetry you might come up with for the other seasons of the year.

Again, you have shown your talent for entertaining in brief. Did it take you a long time to do this, or did you just write
thoughts as they came to mind? I've done both, but would like to get back to doing the latter. This requires less thinking, thus is less of a hassle.

Coincidentally, this has been the way my reviews are written recently. A little thinking, but mostly what I feel
like saying to a person is what I write. I say these things because I get a sense that your poetry flows quite
naturally.

Write on! Doorman.

My review as been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .