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*MugBr* Title: Breakfast Tea

*MugG* Author: Nangwaya-Golden is my sponsor

*MugLP* Reviewed by: KerrieAnnS

*MugLV* First Impression: I am a coffee girl myself, can't live without the stuff! This poem made me chuckle, it was short, too the point and humorous.

*MugV* What I liked most: You have a bouncy rhythm here with each line adhering to the 3 syllable limit. This makes the poem flow along nicely, as I said, in a bouncy way.

I also admire the way you managed to keep to your rhyming scheme without limiting your descriptive words by doing so.

Green tea is
terrible!
Not even
bearable.

This one is my favourite mainly because I also cannot stand green tea.

For the most part (apart from the single part I identify in my suggestions) you have great grammar and punctuation throughout this piece.

*MugR* Suggestions: Just the one, which I think is just a typo :)

Honestly,
too snooty

This needs a full stop at the end.

*MugO* Conclusion: A lovely poem advocating the brilliance of the common breakfast tea. It may be common but there's a reason, because it is the best :)

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