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| (5.0)| My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .A Review Brought To You By: A Dozen Delight. I'm Tina and part of "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" and dropping in to do a quick review. Please consider that all suggestion are based on my opinion and may be different from another reviewer. I hope that my suggestion can help improve your work but it offends you please disregard any suggestions. Thank you for letting me review your item.   Hey ~ Santa Sisco ~ , I am reviewing your item after two days prior to your first. The reason is because as you already know, I am serious and find it fun to give honest reviews. So, for the past two days I have been reviewing kiyasama "Kiya's Big Book of Writing Guidelines" and looking to see what it is I can learn. I did this more for fun -and it started out as fun- but I ended up learning more. After reviewing her item and reading your item "Invalid Item" I had found you did an incredible job providing useful tools to help us members learn. Thank you so much for providing many helpful tips. In Grammarama it shows a table of words to say the correct prononciation. The good news I discovered there is no such word is lye. Maybe as a chemical used in detergent or in soap. I've heard of that old time words used before. Perhaps, it meant mildew or it means a gross matter.  I opened up "Invalid Item" to see what that was and it was an awesome unique link. It was an actual library with different resources.In the Comma Class notes, it wasn't that helpful. The reason is because I have already took the Comma Course. Reading the notes were just notes. Not a helpful link to help let readers see example. In kiyasama"Kiya's Big Book of Writing Guidelines" in Chapter 2 provides excellent examples of comma's, semi colons, and even brackets. I looked at her notes and she provided accurate information. She also goes in-depth explaining to the reader what is essential in putting commas and not where to put them. Also, her quotations marks explanations are great examples to the readers. She informs us not use them in indirect statements, which I found was a helpful learning experience for me. Used to I would have a problem starting a story and deleting because I want to make a statement with he said she said, and kiyasama explains you can do so. The difference is understanding not to do use in indirect he said she said. In"Myths of Poetry" I wanted to view the opinions on writers terms of poetry. What does poetry make you believe is the true cause, and why is the passion fluent in today's society, how is poetry relevant is what I was looking forward. When opening up this link I was excited to know there were many examples of poetry style. I have taken Poetry Class for PDG Gang and also currently taking one for New Horizon Academy From The Ground Up poetry class. You provided awesome links for readers to use. e:coffeeo} I liked your guideliness and tips. In tip 6 I found inspiration through that. I really liked that you added that a review should be helpful and not insulting ex-specially given from dumb members. You brought a smile while I was reading idiot in your tips  .Overall, there was allot of great resources. One of my favorites are added to my bio block so that way I can go to them if I need help in writing a new item. Writer: Tina Marie George Proud Member of WDC! Write with heart-n-passion ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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You responded to this review 10/05/2012 @ 10:20pm EDT