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Review by Vicky bornman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
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Dear Miss Bee

My name is Vicky. To honor your WDC Anniversary I will be doing a Showering Acts of Joy Member to Member Review on Where Dreams Go.

This is a very vivid and image rich piece of poetry. It is beautiful, conjuring up magical pictures. For a few short moments I found myself riding “a mare embellished white” along an ocean filled with pirates and magical beasties and beings. You have very successfully given it a dream like quality.
Your poem has a very pleasing rhythm to it and sounds wonderful when read out loud. The best way I can describe it is being almost hypnotic, very much like the sound of the ocean

I must congratulate you on a fantastic vocabulary that really shines through in this poem. I must also congratulate you on a very well written piece of poetry. You are very talented.

Your use of repetition draws attention and highlights what you want the reader to pay attention to.

This was a very entertaining read that I enjoyed very much.

Thank you for posting your poem on WDC. I will definitely be exploring your portfolio in the future.

Congratulations on your WDC anniversary and please keep writing.

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