Hi hbar ! In just a few days, you will have been a member here at WDC for five years. To wish you a happy anniversary, I thought I'd review one of your poems that caught my eye !

This is simple, but powerful indeed. The Rorschach Inkblot test was designed to tap into the patient's unconscious mind, accessing truths that the conscious mind would most likely reject. In this poem, the narrator's response to the image is "One, left behind in the cold." and "Alone, forever." I love the simplistic honesty that leaves no doubt about the meaning to the poem. I wouldn't change a single thing!

Thank you very much for posting your work. If I'm reviewing it, that means I enjoyed reading it and thought it was very well done. So please, Write On!
Suteki
Suteki