Greetings!

The following are only my suggestions. Ultimately, you can decide what is best for your item.

This was a lovely letter. the choice of words was strong and the reader could realise your feelings for him. The letter was in sequence and I enjoyed reading throughout the letter.

There were a few suggestions that I had regarding your item. Feel free to ignore any of the suggestions below if you don't agree with them.
==>"stomache" should be "stomach". Spelling error.
==> I wanted to ask you something. What does this mean? "that night at driver's ed."
==> "I know this, the entire P.E. class knew this." ---It should be "I know this, and the entire...."

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Have a great day!
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