Greetings!

The following are only my suggestions. Ultimately, you can decide what is best for your item.

Well this was a good description with excellent choice of words. When someone directly reads this piece, the reader doesn't know what it really is or what is the theme but then have a little idea that it was a description. Same happened with me. If I hadn't read the brief description, I wouldn't have known that it was a descriptive writing.

As I said earlier that it was a good piece though I have to say something, my personal suggestions.
You could also add the description of the atmosphere and the environment so that he reader can imagine the whole situation and gets a clear image in mind. Also, as this was a descriptive writing, you should have described each and everything of an object. Like here, the object you supposed was a man and you described a little of his appearance and little of the place he was sitting on. But what if you described his facial features, his eyes, his nose, his lips, his skin, his skin tone, his clothes, his height and etc? It would give am amazing touch to the description! Like below:

"An old man, wearing rugged clothes, torn from some places, sat on the side walk in the solitary confinements of various cardboard boxes, of smelly rubbish and trash. His lips torn and dry, scaly and his eyes filled with depression and grief. His nose, flattened as if it had been hit with something really hard......"
You can write even better description than mine. You know, I loved the description that you gave about the feet. It was really clear and I could imagine it. A writer knows what is best for his writing. I don't mean to discourage you and all, I am only trying to help. If any of my words seem rude, I apologise. I am not a perfect writer.

Anyways, this was a very good attempt and can be a lot improved.
Take care.
Have a great day!
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