A philosophical tale you do weave.
Structured like a song, the melody is clear to the reader.
Form is consistent and conducive to a good reading experience.
Rhyme scheme is immaculate.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is unhurried, the reader wants to linger and take it all in.
Imagery that leaves the reader breathless in the wondrous nature found here.
Grammatically snafu free, no suggestions for improvement are for thee.
Write on!
Copenator out!