Wow. This has got some pow.
Form and structure fit like a glove.
The reader is captivated and entranced by the imagery you so artfully display here.
Senses included in this piece involve hearing, seeing, and feeling.
Flow is smooth.
Pace is unhurried.
Rhyme scheme adds a melodious timber to this piece.
A person adept in the art of singing could well do so with this.
The absence of grammatical snafu's results in the absence of suggestions for improvement.
Write on!
Copenator out!