A prosaic stroll through the Egyptian gods.
A sense of one sunbathing is found here.
Warmed by the rays of the solar orb.
A fantasy blooms and the reader is transported along for the ride.

Structure and form provide a solid base.
Flow is a bit stilted due to the names peppered throughout.
Pace is in no way hampered by grammatical snafu's along the way.
One slight suggestion for improvement would be to break this down into 3 stanzas, at the breaking point of the natural completion of your thought. Why? This give the reader a moment to gather his/her thoughts and proceed to the next scene you so well formulate from line-to-line. 12 lines, 3 stanzas, and this reader thanks you for sharing in the WdC!
Copenator out!