Bloodlust evident is his eyes is something more of us than we would like to admit have experienced. We have either seen it or been it. I think this is the most vivdly descriptive poem that I have ever read on this entire sight. You have a very powerful use of words. I have found by experience that this usually comes from self involvement to a degree that stays with you long after the event has passed. It makes for great writing , but sometimes haunts our souls in a very uninvited way. The fact that even Hell is repulsed by this act is a very strong idea. In the world ,and the world of writing, it always comes down to good verses evil . Often the generality of this can come off as trite or prude or even sappy.This poem is anything but these things. I enjoyed reading it so much that I read it at least three times.The punctuation is a little different,which I am all for,however,i am constantly reminded by the grammar police that it just needs to be consistant.sentences are not required or even desirable in a descriptive piece like this.Your writing is both elegant and honest. Sometimes I read poems where i feel the style and emotion is forced in order to tell a really good story. the opposite is also common. Some people have great elegance and vocabulary but lack a personal story to tell that comes from the soul. Overall i love your poem and think you should keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you.