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 | Self-Proclamation  [E] I wrote what came. I have decided to focus even more on my writing.  |
| (4.0)| This is a Review from Two In One Poetry and Simply Positive... ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Please take note these are only suggestions and opinions. Context: Great context here! You presented nice descriptions in this poem. Imagery: Nice imagery! I especially like these sentences: "Finally I have a sense of direction put forth"." I look up to the sky, a kiss";" "a" path that will undoubtedly bring more self-worth. The arts, the expression of one's self"." Hopefully","one day my works will be put onto the infamous book shelf." -rhyming scheme was a little inconsistent Emotion: Nice emotion!  Grammar and Spelling: There were some punctuation errors. Otherwise, nice work! Overall: Great job! I really enjoyed this piece! This poem was very emtional, and the sentiment was touching. I thought this piece was well-written, and it truly expressed self-expression. The rhyming scheme was a little inconcsistent, and some punctuation errors were spotted throughout, Overall, this piece was well-done! Keep writing! Please feel free to stop by and check out my work as well! "A Cabaret of Memoirs" is available here: http://www.amazon.com/Cabaret-Memoirs-Nataly-Del-Scott/dp/1462612695/ref=sr_1_6?... "Tattered Minds" is available here: http://www.amazon.com/Tattered-Minds-Nataly-del-Scott/dp/1456011146/ref=sr_1_1?i... Here is my new website if you are interested: Website: http://www.wix.com/natalydel/nataly Blessings~ Nataly del
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