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Given: Jan 15, 2012 at 7:42pm
Length: 993 Characters |
967 w/o WritingML
This is your entry for my blogging prompt: What would you use to protect yourself if the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right this second? You state that, since you lack weapons, aside from a large knife, you'd drive to the docks, steal a boat, and go to the middle of a lake to wait it out. I see some major problems right there- you'll find that, unless you steal a sailboat, you'll run out of fuel. Also, if you live above the snow line, it's Winter out- frozen lakes and such. Also, that cat of yours will make a good-looking meat pie before long. As for your idea to just sail along the coast down to South America, you can't drink saltwater, and you'll be exposed to the elements. Chances of Survival 0%
Spelling and Grammar
You need to capitalize proper nouns, and use apostrophes for contractions.
Best of luck with the rest of the contest.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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