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Review of Starting to Write  
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Okay, this is your entry for my Blogging Prompt which was: If the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right now, what would you use to defend yourself? I see some major problems buddy- you didn't follow the prompt. Instead of saying how you'd protect yourself, you pointed me to a story that deals with surviving ZA. A story is nice, but since you didn't show me how you'd survive, the zombie that's was just outside has climbed in through your window and had your brains for breakfast. Chance of Survival- 0%.

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I don't see any problems with spelling or grammar- just follow the prompt next time.

Best of luck with the rest of the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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