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This is your Blogging entry for my Prompt that deals with: What would you use to defend yourself if the Zombie Apocalypse occurred right this second. You mentioned that you don't know much about zombies, and you showed it. Depending on your shotgun situation, if it's chambered for slugs that's good for up to 100 feet, but if you use birdshot, it's only good up to 30 feet. Also, you said that you'd use power tools- you just range the dinner bell for them. Also, you have no other items that would have any real effect. Chances of survival- Less than 25%.

If you wish to learn how to survive ZA, look up Max Brooks and Roger Ma, the two of them, and a few others, have some very practical survival guides.

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Best of luck with the rest of the contest.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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