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Given: Dec 11, 2011 at 9:08am
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Hi Charles!! I just found this gem: your first contest! Good for you!!
The contest looks great and I Iove the colourful banner. The rules are laid out in detail and are clearly presented. I like that you honour your mentors too!
The page covers all the basics and the idea of a hint for the next prompt is an original one! Having the prompt in a totally different colour is helpful too. Using a related picture with the words is a nice touch!
Oh and you don't say who the judges are. I assume it is you for the first run! Some folks just add a little section on Judges!
Or just a simple line in your rules.
My suggestions: {minor--mostly for aesthetics.
Some spelling: "useful" in Itchy water"s tribute line and "accept" instead of "except" all rhyme. They mean different things.
Maybe put your visit these places links, close to the bottom and move the contest Welcome and rules up. They are the important focus. Enlarge your Welcome sign.
Have all you rules in the same colour font for uniformity. The black actually looks pleasing with the red stop signs!
I like your friendly inviting tone and the energetic vibe of your page!! I love poetry too so we can always use another contest for it!
a few tweaks on the look and those corrections and I can bump rating to a 5. This rocks!
Awesome endeavour newbie! Keep up the great work! Go list it on our WDC Power Com link!! I will put it on the bulletin board so we can all know about it!!
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