I love the story, you end it well and complete the circle to where I'm left not still wondering. I'm pretty sure you're sticking to form (and a few years removed from college creative writing classes has my technical terms vocabulary depleted) and that's why you had your stanza's end the way they did... but if you don't mind breaking form, I'd suggest ending it in the same rhythm as the first and second, and removing the camera have it read 'as the wind began to blow blow blow", but try to stray from "telling" us that the wind blew, and stick to the "showing" of the wind "turning the roof rafters to toothpicks" kind of picture.

But, I'm pretty sure you're sticking to form, and most of my suggestions would be changing the "telling" words to "showing", the third stanza is great.

Mike