NOTE: Please remember that the following comments and observatons are only one peson's opinion. Take what you can use but never be shy about discarding what you cannot. Most important of all, keep writing, improving, and contributing to this wonderful site.!

OVERALL SENSE: The POV was out of sequence, and I think if you re-read the poem, you will be able to mend it very quickly.

GRAMMAR/SPELLING: I see nothing at all wrong. Well done!

AREAS FOR IMPROVEMENT: "I looked at him in bewilderment" Somehow that doesn't seem to appropriate. Perhaps, feeling bewildered, I saw him ...
Your expressions and descriptions are quite good and well-suited for the moments shrouded in mystery.,

You are indeed a very talented and prolific writer; someone who emotes palpable feelings. You draw from your innermost imagination a very profound poem.
It was nice to meet you, Myterious Wolf, and a pleasure to read your work. I hope to read lots more.
Lola