Ken the first line enticed me to read more of the poem.

It’s said that love has magic powers,

This poem has a lovely rhythmic flow to it and the word imagery is magical.

The poem itself is hauntingly beautiful.

I especially like he way you describe how your life was grey which to me would mean lifeless.

And how colors swirled around you illuminated your life.

I also felt the emotional projection in your writing for what seemed to be a lost love.

I really enjoyed reading this poem it was like a fairy tale of love.


Summary: I liked everything about this poem, lovely word imagery, emotional feelings and ryhtm of flow