I really like the light and airy tone to this poem.

As I read it I felt like I was skipping romantically along through the words.

I like the way you kept it simple but very effective with your word choices and imagery.


Light sparkles and dances in my eyes This is a real reflection of someone in love when their eyes sparkle

the sight of him brightens the skies The whole world seems brighter when your in love.

he kisses me gentle as a dove The tender kiss of the first love


I noticed a tiny error as I looks up to see my love
as I look up to see my love

On the whole I think you did a great job!

Nicely written!


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