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Rated: E | (3.5)
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I am reviewing as part of the Simply Positive Review team. I offer my opinion based on my limited experience. It is only one in a world of opinions and yours to use or ignore.

*RainbowL* Overall Impression:*RainbowR*

I can clearly understand the feelings in this poem, and the content fits the title.

*Vine1* What I like:*Vine2*

The abab rhyme scheme is consistent throughout. The sonnet form is totally appropriate to the title.

*Vignette2* Problems and suggestions:*Vignette2*

There is a typo in the first stanza.
The feelings are presented directly. It would improve this if you follow the rule "show, don't tell" a little more.

*BalloonR* Comments:*BalloonR*

This is a sweet poem, one that would be a good gift for one you love.

*Earth* Thank you for sharing.

*Quill* Keep writing!

Elizabeth
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 09/15/2011 @ 4:18pm EDT
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