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 In The Balance Open in new Window. [E]
A flash fanfic for SG:SG-1, Mitchell's POV.
by J.K.Harvey♥ Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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This piece is so short that I don't know if I'm going to pull up my usual review form for it. The moment that you described did hold a powerful idea, the act of changing time so that everything is effected and how that feels. This is a powerful emotion that you could easily mold an entire story around if you choose to. It wouldn't need to be a fanfiction either. I hope you'll think about that.


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