I like this but not as much as "What is Poetry?" Although all the lines do not have exactly 10 syllables, this is still an awesome sonnet. The word "comment" has two "m's" I believe, but keep in mind, I spend every day of my life telling 5th graders that paragraphs need indents and periods, so I don't know much about form and structure in adult poetry. I can't sing either, but that doesn't keep me from loving music. I love poetry and this poem just makes me happy.