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Review by April Sunday
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Jan 24, 2011 ---

Hello, Embe. Please let me express how touching your direct line of poetry became to me over the last few years. I sincerely hope you are entering poetry contests all over the place. You are very good at what you do and how you sytematically include that special proper vocab inside the fine poetry you create. Your sense of wording to explore and reach is well --- shall we say --- better than seasonal pens alone, way beyond the cream of the crop. For this treasure: "Invalid Item"  you have won first place bar none in "Invalid Item" 

At this time unsure what the future holds for TEFF's contests. Now announcing --- suppose we wait and see, okay? Always did want to take them to the entire world wide web.

Cordially with mucho thanks.

teffom@writing.com

Comment: Fine vocab, lines bait readers with detail, rhymes reach the soul, supplying via sound bite this scary devil. Truly a mood setter.

Oh, Embe -- guess what? Your poetry shall be highlighted in the mission statement of: "Invalid Item"  and noted as well on -- "Invalid Item" 

GP inclusion ala prize.
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