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Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. The author brings us an interesting take on progress this evening. Country homes have for a long time used well water. He mentions that he bathes in the creek and the cattle live on the land. All that went on a long time ago as well.



EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK: Today, though there are scientists that have to get their noses into everything. The only real polluters are the chemical plants that let the run off end up in the water supply.

Go back and fix the scientists and check industries if you want to clean the water and air. Starting on a small farm won't make a difference in the big picture. All it will do is intrude on a very tranquil lifestyle that few enjoy any longer.


TONE: Good depth of feelings. Good piece.


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good

Good job with this.

OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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