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Changing my format for reviews.
DISCLAIMER: This comes to you as a reader would see your work. I have only my opinion to offer. Sometimes I might find a bit of your work I thought that I might express feelings about. If it struck a cord etc. If there should be such an entry under 'EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK' that is just my feelings and not meant to hurt or take liberty with the authors work.


TITLE: Fits the content well.


IMAGERY: Good and vivid. The author brings us his thought about writing in this piece. How some people might just witness something and not feel the urge to write about it.



EMOTIONAL CORD STRUCK:

While others, like him, are compelled to write. To bring an idea to life. To bring injustice to view. To express love in terms that might be a bit more meaningful than simply words spoken.


TONE: Good depth of feelings. Expression is part of writing. The good the bad and the ugly of life. Good part;

You better write one first.
Wow, writing is a lot of work. (VERY TRUE)


SPELLING ERRORS: None found.


FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good


OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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