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An awesome poem!
A few parts you need to fix up -- capitalisation. That's all.
Everything else is great!
I like everything in this poem -- the way you write, the format, the sometimes-rhyming-sometimes-not, it's all great.
I especially like the way you have been kind of repetitive and just the general poem.


*Thanks for the random read!*

Keep Writing, Tara.
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