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TITLE: Fits the content well.

IMAGERY: Good and vivid. A heartfelt tribute to the people that keep us safe. They dont question they just do. With honor and respect for their country and all of us back here. This piece is sad because we loose so many of them everyday. With pieces like this to help remind us; just how much they give. Good part;

Oh the cost I've paid
All to keep my brother safe.

TONE: Good depth of feelings. There is respect throughout this piece. Loss is also felt for the long lives lost. The tears arent mentioned by the families but we know they fall.

FLOW: Flow is good. The word choice is good

OVERALL: Good read. Please keep sharing.

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