I know the noise your mother made, because I just made it, myself. This is good. Is the narrator here "Spring"?

Look, both the personification of the seasons and the depiction of them as jealous rivals is good. The little play on a picture being framed? That's good, too. I'm just not sure slamming them together is the BEST idea you had in all this - it seems too much for such a short piece, and dilutes both ideas by sort of confusing them.

Clever, though! I'd do two short compositions, though, instead of one. Perhaps an art thief has concealed a great work behind a cheap print, and somehow it ends up in the jailhouse instead of the museum, where he gets to laugh because it's in jail and he framed it? I dunno.