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 My Blade Open in new Window. [13+]
what happend me relized what i did was wrong.
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Review of My Blade  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
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I think you've got something here, but it is a little vague to me. I'm thinking a suicide attempt because of love unrequited? The last line - "I don't have anything else to (do?) but I love you...?????

Sort of a streaming consciousness and maybe that's what you intended and I'm just a little dense today!

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