This choice: You confess to her what is going on and ask for advice • Go Back... "Um.. I'm, OK I guess." you manage, trying to confine the rising tide of hunger within you.
Rae looks at you askance.
"Are you sure? You don't look OK. Have you come down with a tummy bug or something? You look like your going to barf!"
Quite the opposite you think to yourself! If only she knew... well, why couldn't you tell her? She might have some suggestions. It's worth a shot.
"Not quite, though it does concern my, er, 'tummy'." you say, patting your belly and attempting a weak smile.
"Aww, what's wrong?"
You glance back and forth but the corridor seems clear here, no-one else to hear.
"I... I want to eat you Rae."
You could hear a pin drop for next few seconds, and possibly Rae's jaw dropping too, at least metaphorically.
"I'm sorry, what did you say?"
"I want, need to eat you." you say, feeling the hunger rising inside you, but still under control for now.
Rae blushes feverishly.
"Algie! I didn't know you felt like that about me!" she says, her eyes flicking around to see if anybody is watching. "Look, I appreciate the sentiment... especially since no-one has wanted that first before. Heh! Most men just want to please themselves and don't care about..."
She obviously has completely the wrong idea about what you mean by 'eat' so you interrupt her.
"No no no, I... Well, I admit that would be enjoyable too, but..." you pause, how to explain this? Then you get it.
"I want to eat you whole, by opening my mouth like this." and you let your drop, much less metaphorically than she did earlier.
Rae stares wide eyed into your mouth that now stretches about a foot tall from teeth to teeth.
"That's.... different." she manages.
"I just can't keep my mind off your body," you just can't stop yourself now, your mouth running away with you, "how you'd taste as you slip into me, how my moist, slick insides would grip and squeeze your whole body as it oozes into my belly, how I'd totally suck you down... Oh god!"
You grab the wall for support, the urges inside you starting to tell. A warm hand rests on your shoulder and you look up into Rae's caring eyes.
"Hey hey, don't fret. I'll help you."   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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