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Rated: GC · Interactive · Adult · #2299624
You're Matt, a tiny, living with the worst luck ever. (UPDATED BIO 08/12/24)
This choice: Jenna feeds you to an unaware Ashley. (Reserved)  •  Go Back...
Chapter #6

Made with Love... and Misery

    by: matthias Author IconMail Icon
(Chapter originally written by worstfailure)

As your sister lifted the cookie you were in off the plate, you finally felt relief. Surely she must've realized you'd suffered enough by now and decided to break you out of the colossal cookie so you could at last reform. Maybe the heat had made you delusional, because it was only on the rarest of days that Jenna ever decided enough was enough when it came to her so called "pranks" and she was just getting started.

"You know, bro, I feel bad for Ashley," Jenna said conversationally as she carried you back to her spot at the counter. "I mean, that poor girl works herself to the bone in that kitchen to whip up food that's better than anything served in so-called fancy restaurants, but she rarely gets to eat any herself! So it really is nice of you to volunteer to treat her to the most scrumptious cookie she made!" Your eye bulged wider in the cookie as you realized what she was saying, earning another giggle from your sister. "I see that look in your eye, but don't worry! I'll loan you the two dollars for the cookie now so it's not stealing, but I'll make sure Ashley knows this is specially from you."

Making a quick trip in the kitchen while Ashley's back was turned, Jenna grabbed some plastic wrap and left. Once back behind the counter she wrapped you up tight. Correctly predicting your body was still in too much pain to put up a fight after coming out of an oven, Jenna wasn't especially concerned with you escaping as she stuffed you in a shelf under the counter by her spot behind the register. She pulled out two dollars and rang up the price of a lone cookie in the register, planning to have your mom pay her back by taking it out of your allowance.

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Two hours passed and more customers had steadily been pouring in. The new cook, Tiffany, a mousy freshman at Weston, clocked in to provide Ashley with backup in the kitchen and a middle-aged waitress who'd been working at the diner since Jenna started had also come in, lightening both their workloads enough that when a lull came, Jenna seized her moment.

"Wanna take our breaks together?" Jenna asked Ashley through the window into the kitchen.

Ashley looked excited and then crestfallen. "Maybe I shouldn't," she pouted. "There's still, like, a lot of dishes to clean before the next wave of customers come in."

"Oh, that's too bad," Jenna said sadly, as if she already didn't know the magic words to make her best friend jump at her command. "Matt had a surprise for you. Oh well--"

"HE DOES?!" Ashley said, beaming, not even bothering to dry her soapy hands as she hurried to undo the straps of her apron. She turned to the new girl. "Tiff, I'm going on break!"

Ashley bounded out of the kitchen and together she and Jenna went outside into the alley behind Diane's. Normally she and her bestie would just enjoy the time they had to talk about classes or parties at Weston or make plans after work. And, of course, a frequent topic of conversation Ashley kept prying into was your continued status with Mari. Ashley knew you and Mari were in a relationship and so didn't want to overstep her bounds... but if there ever was trouble in paradise, she wanted to be the first one to know to make sure she was the one to... comfort you. Luckily she didn't need to beat around the bush now as her bestie told her cute little Matt had a surprise for her.

"Where is he?" Ashley asked, expecting Jenna to produce her brother from some kind of pocket.

"Oh, sorry, Matt's not here. He said there was something important he needed to care of," Jenna lied, frowning in sympathy at Ashley. Her friend's bubbly enthusiasm seemed to deflate a bit when informed of your absence. "But, he wanted me to make sure you got this!" She held up the cookie you were embedded in. "He paid out of his own pocket and everything!"

"He did?" Ashley said, delighted to hear her crush had given her a gift. It may have been just a cookie, but she was starved, and she was happy enough that her crush was thinking of her.

"Yeah," Jenna said. "Matt told me you're the best cook he's ever known, that he's never tasted anything as delicious as your cooking, and that it's only right that you get to treat yourself."

"AWWW, the little cutie," Ashley giggled, blushing.

"In fact," Jenna said, deciding to really pile it on. "He said that this was the most delicious, most scrumptious, most spectacular cookie he ever smelled, even compared to all your other amazing treats! And he said, what was it? "Make sure, no matter what, this extra sweet treat gets to that extra sweet cutie for me!""

"He said that?" Ashley asked, her blush growing deeper, her eyes growing wide and her voice becoming much more serious.

"Exact words," Jenna said.

"O... M... G!"

Jenna handed Ashley the cookie and the curvaceous redhead accepted it like a priceless treasure. You wriggled furiously but accomplished nothing other than shaking the most microscopic of crumbs off the cookie. You blinked furiously, trying to communicate a cry for help but that too went unnoticed amidst the countless chocolate chunks. Ashley was looking at the cookie without really seeing it. Instead she was focusing on what she thought the cookie represented. Not only had you given her a gift and complimented her, but for the first time, Ashley believed she received a clear signal, that you were flirting back with her!

This cookie was more than food. It was a symbol of your possible reciprocated affection for her. She wanted to keep it with her always... and, it just so happened, there was one way to make sure this symbol of love was always a part of her.

One second Jenna was watching Ashley make goo-goo eyes at a cookie, the next her best friend scarfed the entire thing in her mouth in two bites! The giant cookie caused her cheeks to swell to cartoonishly huge proportions even as she began chewing. Jenna's jaw dropped. She went through the instructions of the Heimlich Maneuver in her head, half-convinced her best friend was about to choke on her brother, but Ashley's teeth worked fast, masticating the cookie and greatly reducing its size in seconds.

The inside of Ashley's mouth still smelled of strawberries. That was inexplicably your first thought before you were mashed between her teeth mercilessly, bits of your cookie prison breaking apart and being ground into dust around you. Ashley's mouth was full of saliva and it soaked your body. Entire chunks disappeared down Ashley's throat, some barely chewed, but she gulped them down without any effort whatsoever. She was eating as if she hadn't eaten in days and this cookie was the first morsel of food she'd come across. The only reason you lasted so long without being gulped down was because when your body was chewed it was squashed, still in its elongated, misshapen form. Having only just gotten back the smallest modicum of strength, you threw your arm around one incisor, viewing mastication as a kinder fate than being swallowed. Unfortunately, this only bought you a few seconds as now Ashley's chocolate stained tongue wrapped around you and began savoring you. You were battered by her tongue and then deposited back on her molars to be crushed between her teeth again, your body becoming like a wad of gum, but your taste driving Ashley wild.

"Mmmmmm! Chuweeh, buh suh guh!" Ashley said with her mouthful. This really was the most scrumptious cookie of them all. There must've been some secret ingredient in it that she didn't remember adding. Either way she loved how delicious it was! She really was, like, a super genius in the kitchen.

Finally, there was only one gulp's worth of treat left and you were part of it. You couldn't even twitch in your squishy lump of a form as Ashley's tongue lifted and pushed you along with the remaining chocolate chips and cookie chunks towards the back of her throat.

Ashley swallowed hard and the final morsel of her treat plummeted down into her stomach as effortlessly as the rest of it had. She sighed blissfully, so happy that you'd been thinking of her. It was only then Ashley noticed her best friend staring at and Ashley realized how... intimately... she'd treated devouring a cookie. She laughed nervously.

"Heh, sorry abouUUURRPP!"

Ashley slammed a hand over her mouth, embarrassed, but this sent Jenna into peals of laughter! Ashley chuckled along, then, finding more humor in how funny her friend seemed to find it, laughed along with her even louder, giving a big belly laugh.

"Oh man," Jenna said after two minutes, finally able to compose herself. "Well at least you liked Matt's cookie."

"It was delicious! He sure did pick the best one! When you see him, let him know how much I loved it!"

"I will," Jenna smirked, as she snuck a quick glance at her friend's stomach. "I'm sure he'll be delighted to hear it."

What happens next?

1) Ashley goes home after her shift and only then does Jenna call to let Ashley know she's devoured you.

2) Jenna takes Ashley to a party after work, with you still trapped inside her friend's gut.

You have the following choices:

1. Ashley heads home with you in her belly.

*Noteb*
2. Jenna takes Ashley (and you) to a party.

*Noteb* indicates the next chapter needs to be written.
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