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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Adult · #2291351
A fresh interactive for the short genre. Short from birth, you'll be treated like a baby.
This choice: Marie is under your control  •  Go Back...
Chapter #7

Your crush is under your control

    by: yt1989 Author IconMail Icon
“Okay, okay!” you said to Marie, still dangling as she held onto the back of your neck as if you were a misbehaving puppy. You reached out and slid the iPad open. Marie instantly released you and you crashed down onto the ground with a thud. You sat up and looked towards this massive woman with the mind of an infant as she entertained herself scrolling through your iPad. You had to find some way to incentivize her to do what you wanted.

“Hey Marie” you called up to her “would you like me to get you a game on that iPad?”
Marie vigorously nodded her head.
“Okay then” you continued, “first I need something from you”. Marie clocked her head to the side in curiosity.

You were a bit nervous about what you were about to do next, it was without a doubt morally wrong but you always had such a massive crush on Marie you couldn’t help but take advantage of this opportunity that had landed on your lap. You began to unbuckle your pants and slide them down.
“Eh…” you began to say, trying to sound confident but your voice quivering with fear, “I need you to first suck on this” you continued, pulling your underwear down to reveal your privates to Marie.

Your heart was racing, but you knew if you were to have any hope of convincing Marie to suck you off, you needed to sound like you were the authority figure in this situation. And not a little baby as her undeveloped mind might mistake you for. At first Marie just continued to sit there looking down at your penis, not really sure what it was. You were still contemplating what you should do next, if you should lay down here or maybe even lead Marie towards your bedroom.
“If you want we can go to….. woooaah” you were in the middle of inviting her to your room when she leaned forward grabbing you underneath your armpits and pulling you towards her. She briefly held you down on her lap. You were completely exposed now from the waist down as this beautiful 25 year old girl stared down at you. She began to lift you up until you were level with her face and then…

Does she follow your instructions?

Yes - she does exactly as you ask
Not exactly - she puts a different part of you inside her mouth (maybe your head for example)
No - she finds it disgusting and punishes you instead

You have the following choices:

1. She follows your instructions

*Noteb*
2. She misunderstand you

*Noteb*
3. She refuses and you get punished

*Noteb* indicates the next chapter needs to be written.
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