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Rated: 18+ · Interactive · Fanfiction · #2258575

A story based bodyswap interactive for shield hero (will give 1k+ GP for addition)

This choice: I wish you were here instead! (Body and Life Swap)  •  Go Back...
Chapter #5

Reaily crumbles

    by: Supmcsup Author IconMail Icon
A/N: this my first time trying a transformation sequence hope it went well.

CRACK

Everything twisted and turned like someone turned reality itself into a rag and was trying to ring off what it deemed incorrect.

"Wh-What the hell!?" Naofumi yelled aloud.

No one else in the courtyard seemed phased by reality itself collapsing in front of their very eyes. Well everyone besides the mad crackling of Bitch's laugh.

"What did you do!?" Naofumi tried to yell above the cracking and twisting that reality was being besieged by.

Bitch's near insane laugh died down as she stared at Naofumi and with a wide smile she spoke, her voice broken up by bouts of giggles.

"I think you mean what did you, princess?" Almost as if she had told the funniest joke in the world, the Shield Hero once more broke into laughter.

This brought a fury to the Princess's eyes as he stared at the seemingly mad woman before him.

"Stop speaking in damn riddles you're obviously the cause of...whatever the hell this!?" Naofumi yelled out as he waved around him to the distasteful state of reality.

Once more the Hero looked up at him from the gallows and let loose a giggle before speaking:

"Once more I am confused, Malty- wait Bitch, why I would be the cause of this after all your backstabbing and scheming, you even tried to kill your own sister it's clear you're the cause of this," Naofumi once more began laughing as both felt a wave of nausea that quickly ended and Bitch found his rightful place in the gallows, while the innocent Shield Hero was free.

Bitch's eyes widen as they took in the new perspective before shouting out:

"You bitch! What did you do!?"

Naofumi just gave a thin smile before a shake of her head. Still even in the moment of utmost peril she found herself being unlike the now seemingly driven mad ex-princess, but she still humored him.

"I think that name belongs to you now. After all, who else could have such wonderful bright red hair. Such a shame your looks are to be wasted,"

Bitch's eyes widened once as reality seemed to shimmer and shake above the brave hero's head.

CRACK

Bitch's face- no his entire body seemed to shake as a bright ruby red bang fell to the middle of his face.

"You had such a wonderful body nice petite arms-"

CRACK

"A thin nice hourglass figure-"

CRACK

"Stop it!" Bitch shouted out. though the gallows stopped her movements she still shook at the slowly approaching Hero.

"Of course let's not forget your medium sized tits-"

CRACK

"I bet you wished they were larger when you were younger, though I think medium is perfectly acceptable for a whore like you!" Naofumi shouted as he arrived at the gallows next to the slightly teared up backstabber

"Stop...please stop this!" Bitch shouted at the now kneeling Hero

Naofumi simply ignored her and grabbed her head in his hand.

"Let us not forget of course your beautifully soft face-'

CRACK

"Such beautiful green eyes, and supple lips that anyone would love to kiss"

CRACK

By this point Naofumi's face was just inches away from Bitch. His words were soft, and breathy as he inched closer.

"You are truly a diamond in the filth of this kingdom, but you had to ruin it with that scheming, whore voice of yours!"

CRACK

Naofumi yelled as he slapped her face, surprisingly it left a pretty decent mark most likely because of the drastic level difference between the two.

Finally Naofumi stood up and gave the bitch a light smile before speaking

"Hope you enjoy your new life,"

And with those very simple words reality itself seemed like it was fixing itself until a bright flash and suddenly the murmuring of the stands came back in full force.

"What did you say?" The Queen asked as she looked down at her disappointing daughter

"It matters not the Queen, I think we should end this. It seems all matters have been resolved...though may I make one last request?" Naofumi said with a smile and a bow

"Hmm let me hear it,"

"I do believe you are currently the holder of Bitch the slave correct?" Naofumi asked as his smile grew

"Yes, though I plan on handing it off to either you or Sir Motoyasu," Naofumi's eyes had a spark as he heard this, and conversely Bitch's eyes widdened in terror

"May I ask you to do a order….if my memory serves me if the original owner makes a command before they hand off the slave the new owner can't cancel it"

"What is this order you wish?"

"Well besides the obvious order of actually fighting in the waves, I want to add to the name change. It's a very simple punishment that she can avoid, hell I bet Motoyasu will still call her old name. So how about she is forced to speak in third person? She'll never forget that way!" Naofumi let a loud as Bitch looked up at the Queen shaking as she desperately tried to speak.

"P-Please don't do this I am-" The Queen quickly shot her down.

"Silence! I think Sir Naofumi has a point, and I order you to speak in third person so you can never forget your crimes!"

"What!? You can't do this you have to listen to me-" as soon as Bitch said "me" purple lighting came spewing forth her chest punishing her.

The Queen gave one last smile before walking away. Promptly ending the trial. Soon a large man walked over to Bitch. He quickly undid the lock on her and Trash's gallow before quickly grabbing onto both of their arms.

"P-Please stop this...I-" once more Bitch was shocked releasing more tears

"Malty dear!" Trash yelled out as he thrashed about but still the large man held still and continued to walk.

Switching to first person

I let out a huff, I tried a few other times to talk to the big dude toting me around. But it seemed like nothing got through to him...not to mention the constant shocks at me refusing to obey that damn order. I refuse to drop to such a level. I just have to convince The Queen that I am not Malty and that she somehow switched with me...still not sure of that.

"Milady I brought them to you," The large man said as he knocked on a large wooden door

"Come in," the familiar voice of The Queen broke through

Perfect, this is my chance to convince her!

The large man opened the door and walked a few steps before dropping us and walking out.

I quickly surveyed my surroundings only to feel my heart drop as that damn Bitch stood next to The Queen, with a wide smile. And that's not to mention the other heroes standing around.

"Mal-Bitch, come closer, we are going to start talking about who you will go with to make sure you stick to fighting the wave part of your punishment," The Queen said with a light smile.

I stood still and I refused to move. I will not take that bitch's punishment for her!

"Listen to me I-" Once more I was shocked I quickly collapsed to the ground and let an ear shattering scream. I could feel bile rise to my lips as the shocking continued. This was by far the worst one I had ever experienced.

"Be careful bitch I would expect you would know this, but the more a slave resists the more painful the punishment will be," Bitch said with that damn smug smile as I slowly tried to get up.

"Mal-er Bitch...are you okay?" Motoyasu asked as he tried to step forward only for The Queen to raise her hand

I so desperately wanted to yell at him for asking such a stupid question but I stayed silent I need to convince them.

"Please listen...that's not…" I stopped as I tried to think what to say not to get shocked

"That's not Naofumi-" as soon as I said that another shock ran through my body as confusion ran through my mind

"You're still trying to lie even after all this?" She said with raised eyebrows, I swear I am going to wipe that smug look off her goddamn face sooner or later.

"Enough of this, Bitch we wanted you here to discuss where you should go," The Queen said making the room fall silent as once more I tried to stand up my legs were becoming unstable

"Anyone who wants to try and convince me raise your hands," The Queen ordered,

"It would be the ultimate form of justice to reform a criminal," Itsuki said with what felt like stars in his eyes

"No thank you, I would rather not be too weak for my party, may I be excused?" Ren said with disdain all over his face

"Well she was my previous party member it would only make sense for her to come back to me, after all that means you just took one of my party members weakening our team dynamic," Motoyasu said while looking over me...with how he constantly tried to get into Raphtalia's skirt and the other nobles I fear if I am forced to join him.

"It would fit for me to watch over her, she was once my party member, and maybe we can instill some good ideas if she stayed long enough with me," the witch said with a knowing smirk on that stolen face, if he was able to change me so easily I fear what else he can do…

The Queen gave a look through before speaking

"Wait!" I yell as suddenly a thought came forth...maybe I could just do it solo...I would have to convince them that I will change...and listening to that damn order would help with that...but is it worth my pride?
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