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This family deals with a freaky friday type situation after visiting a strange giftshop!
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Chapter #3

Nobody

    by: Thomas Johnson Author IconMail Icon
Friday evening, the 3 Ruiz siblings ventured into the mall together as each of them needed something different. Zach seen that his two older sisters were getting into the car together, which usually meant that they were gonna go shopping together. He hurriedly got his things, and ran out to the driveway before his sister Bailey pulled away.

“Phew! Just in time” he said as he got into the backseat of Bailey’s car.

“You’re lucky you got out here when you did, or else I woulda left your ass here” she said, half-serious.

“But ya didn’t, cause ya love me Bailey” he teased, making her laugh.

They soon arrived at the mall, and as soon as they got in, Zach split from the two of them. He knew that it would take forever with them, so he decided against it.

“You better not have us waiting on you Zach” Natalie sneered. She always to tormented him, even when they were kids. He replied with two middle fingers, before turning around and heading off.

Zach needed to grab some quality work pants before he started trade school as an electrician. After researching the best bang for his buck, he settled on a pair that luckily his local mall sold.

He waltzed into the store and walked up to one of the workers, “Hey man, could you tell me where the Dickers work pants are? I need a 32x34”.

“On the back wall, there’s a bunch of cubbies full of em, take yer pick over there” the worker said, pointing to the back.

Zach thanked the worker and headed over to the back wall. He was able to find the pants easily, and took them over to the dressing room. He had never tried them on before, so he figured it'd be better to find the right fit here. He stripped down to his boxers, and tried the first pair on. He looked at himself in the mirror. “I mean, they look fine, but they're mad tight around the crotch” Zach said aloud to himself.

The tightness at his crotch could be attributed his junk being held down to his thigh by the pants. Being a shower was tough sometimes, especially in instances like this. All 6 inches of Zach’s dong was on full display in these pants. He searched and felt around for the tag, finally finding it on the back of his right leg. It read: Dickers Work Pants/Slim fit.

“Slim fit? Ah hell, I need the regular fit. No wonder my dick is getting choked out in these.” He said as he shimmied out of them.

He put his shorts back on, and quickly went back out to grab the regular fit. This time, he ran into a female worker, who was folding the other pairs of work pants in the cubbies.

She looked over at him, and smiled. “Hi there sir, can I help you with anything?”

“Uh, yeah! Could you help me find these in the regular fit? The slim fit is way too tight on me!”

“No problem sir! Just give me a second!” She said as she turned around and bent over to dig through one of the bottom cubbies.

All Zach could do was stare at the worker’s ass as she bend over in front of him, as it was practically on full display. It was nice and fairly round.

"Definitely a nice booty", Zach thought. He felt this dick start to tingle, which made him quickly look away and find other things to distract him.

“Aaaaaand here we are! 32x34 Regular fit! Is that all I could help you with?” She asked.

“Nope! Thank you!” Zach said as he took the pants from her, and covered up his stiffy.

He got back into the dressing room, and got the new jeans on. A perfect fit! “I think these are the winner! Ill grab another pair in black and head back to the car!” Zach said as he observed himself in the mirror.

He changed back into his shorts, grabbed another pair of the pants, and headed over to buy them. Once he finished everything, he stepped out of the store and couldn’t quite remember which way he had came from.

“Was it….left? No, no it was right. Or maybe, forward?” He pondered. Zach Ruiz was definitely a smart kid, although his grades never showed it. This instance was definitely a similar instance, where his memory had just failed him for whatever reason.

Something in his gut had told him to go left, so he just decided to go that way, thinking it was going to lead him back over to where his sisters were.

On his way there, he seen by a pair of girls who kept making eye contact with him and giggling from a nearby bench, which caused him to flash a smile at them. They must’ve liked it, because they both turned red and continued giggling. Zach knew that a lot of girls found him cute, but he was rather oblivious to it until recently. He’d kind of grown up as the “ugly duckling” of his family, as his parents and his sisters were just beautiful people. It all started his junior year of high school, when he hit a growth spurt and lost the rest of his baby fat. His jaw had become more defined, and his body had toned up. He slowly started looking more and more like his father with each passing day. Nowadays, Women, young and old, would stare at him, wink, and even blow kisses at him, unaware that he was this naive 18 year old kid. Now, pair his looks with what he kept in his pants, and Zach definitely was going to capture and break a lot of hearts in his 20’s.

As he kept walking, the stores had begun to look unfamiliar to him, which let him know immediately that he was going the wrong way. He was about to turn around, when an older looking storefront had caught his eye. It was a neon-like sign that read:

"Realm Gifts & Novelties? Sounds neat” he thought.

He got closer and peered through the windows of the store. Zach had a feeling in his stomach again, this time telling him that he should take a peek inside. He couldn't explain it, but he just had to go in.

“Fuck it, I got time” Zach said to himself, strolling into the dark store.

The store was surprisingly dim, despite how well-lit the rest of the mall was. Zach thought it to the store's overall look, which she attributed it to portraying an ancient type look. Behind a really old looking counter, stood a middle-aged Korean woman, with pale skin and kind eyes. She smiled at Zach, and welcomed her into the store.

"Hello there young sir, what brings you in to my Realm today?" the woman said.

“I don’t really know ma’am, I got lost in the mall and I just felt like coming in”, Zach said, as his eyes continued to wander the shelves.

"Just so you know, everything here is up for sale. If you find it, just ask me"

“Dope! Thank you” he said.

The stores inventory had all sorts of international items that Zach had seen on before, but never in person. He was curious to see if there were weird creatures like in Gremlins or some other sci-fi movies.

While searching, he came across a small box that looked like it carried something fancy. Curious to what was inside, he opened it, and to his surprise, were two of the most expensive-looking rings that he had ever seen. They looked like black wedding bands, but on the band were black crystals that shone even in the dark. The glow really jumped out to him and him instinctively reached out and grabbed the box.

“Dudeeee, woahhh” he whispered, observing the rings up close.

He looked, and looked all over the shelf, but couldn't find a price tag. Still determined to get the rings, he took it over to the worker at the counter.

“There’s no price on this rings, and I really want to try and get them”, Zach explained.

The lady looked down at the rings and smiled. “Was there no tag? Odd.” she said as she opened the box, and stared at the rings.

“I looked everything for em, did you put them out by mistake?”

"Possibly" the woman sighed, "Oh well. I said that everything was for sell, and that includes this! Take it!" the woman said, sliding the box over towards Bailey. Those of the Rings of Gyohwan! Very special in our culture. They are said to bring loved ones together like never before imagined, understanding life through their eyes."

“You sure? No take backs!”

“Im sure Mr. Ruiz. Now go! Be with your loved ones” the woman said.

Zach was elated to hear this, as he thanked the woman and hurried out the door. Normally, he’d think about how a compete stranger would know his last name, but he was in such a good mood that he decided not to care. As he walked out, he made a quick right, then another quick right, and suddenly he was at the entrance where he and his sisters came in from. Unbeknownst to him, the store that he had once entered faded away, reverting back into a vacant mall space.

He sat down at a bench near the exit, and no more than two seconds later, his two older sisters appeared. They seemed very content which themselves, both with multiple bags in each hand.

As they approached, Zach joked. “Damn you guys hit up every store or what?”.

Bailey laughed, “No, there were just all these sales at all these different stores, we couldn’t pass it up!”

The three of them then headed toward Bailey's car. Zach let Natalie have the front seat, as he climbed into the back so that he could look at the free rings he got, undisturbed.

At Home

His sister parked n front of their house, and they all got out of her car. He thanked Bailey for taking him, and rushed up to his room. Now that he was alone, he pulled rings out from his pocket. Who was he going to give the other ring to? Each of them deserved it, but he had to make a choice.

“Maybe I can give the others a gift card or something” he pondered, thinking about who should get half of his latest find.

Zach sighed, "Fine, I'll just give it to:"

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1. One of his Parents

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2. Bailey

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3. Natalie

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