This choice: The door opens, someone is coming into the house • Go Back...Chapter #6The door opens, someone is coming into the house by: Tisch   Before Jack manages to sneak under the door, the door swings open and in walks a tan, barefooted girl. A noticeable stench permeated from her feet, causing Jack to take a few steps back. "Hey, guys! I finally made it!" the girl excitedly said. Voices from behind Jack celebrated. At first, not recognizing who this was, Jack took a moment to analyze the girl up and down, and soon came to the conclusion that this was actually his good friend Mariah. "Why the hell isn't she wearing any shoes? Or socks for that matter?" Jack spoke to himself. There wasn't any time for him to contemplate this any longer, however, as Mariah quickly began walking over to get to her friends: and Jack was right in her pathway.
"Wait, Mariah look down here!" Jack cried as he ran. Of course, being preoccupied on the party, Mariah had no way of hearing or finding Jack. She just kept walking. Jack made one last effort to run off to the side and out of the way of Mariah's mammoth foot, but stumbled and fell. He looked up, finding that his friend was going to step on him. Jack closed his eyes and hoped for the best.
When Jack opened his eyes again and breathed in, a foul odor stung his nostrils. "Oh my god.." he said. Jack tried to reach over to his face and plug his nose, but something kept his arms from moving. That's when Jack took a closer look at where he actually was. He was caught in between Mariah's big and second biggest toes. Some toe jam was holding Jack in place, and everything became a lot clearer for him. Gagging as he did so, Jack wiggled around, trying to create some sort of leverage for himself, and to a minor degree, it worked. This got the attention of Mariah, though that wasn't a good thing. When she sat down at the couch, Mariah began scrunching her toes. "Ugh, I think I got something stuck in there," she thought. Just as irritated as Mariah, if not more, Jack was being mushed around, Mariah's toes having complete and utter dominance over him. When Mariah was apparently satisfied with her work, she stopped squeezing and went back to her conversation.
"Mariah.." Jack moaned. "I have so many questions". Jack remained still, there was nothing more he could really do in this position. As time passed, Mariah nonchalantly moved about her toes, smushing Jack harder against the paste stuck in between her toes, and creating a more difficult barrier for him to break free of. As she did this, it became more and more difficult for Jack to remain conscious. The aroma grew worse, as did the heat. Finally, Jack was done in as Mariah involuntarily scrunched her toes as she stretched.
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