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Chapter #8

Jack commits to his plan and it succeeds

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Looking upwards, Jack saw (from all that he could tell) that Trish was completely distracted by her meal, meaning this was probably the best of times for him to try and make an escape. Jack sent his body into overdrive, making a twisting motion and heading downwards, hoping to exit Trish's shirt from below. Surprisingly, this maneuver seemed to work as Jack made more and more progress. Keeping a steady pace, Jack kept up his efforts and managed to squeeze past the tightest part of Trish's bosom, which was an excessively difficult task. After that, though, it was all smooth sailing.

Jack slid down Trish's midsection and ended up at her waistline, next to the end of her shirt. Jack crawled out and now on her lap, looked back up to Trish and concluded she hadn't noticed his escape. With his plan a striking success, Jack began descending Trish's leg and went to the edge of her chair. Without any interruptions, Jack made it down there in an instant as well. From there, Jack went into the living room and was heading for the front door when he heard the family dismiss from the table. Taking a moment to look back and check if he was in danger, Jack spotted Trish's younger siblings making a dash for the living room and had to go into hiding. He dashed for the couch and managed to sneak under a small gap just as Trish's sister sat down.

Unfortunately, this meant that Jack was now trapped for the meantime as the little girl's behind covered the only exit, but Jack was very willing to wait it out in here if it meant he wasn't with Trish. Just then, Jack heard Trish verbally communicate confusion, presumably as she had just noticed Jack's disappearance. "Huh?" she said. "I could have swore I packed him in there tight enough...".

"Something wrong, dear?" Trish's mom called out to her. She casually shook her head and walked around the table, searching for Jack. With no success, Trish stormed away upstairs, very much irritated. She was planning on having a night with the little guy and now nothing. Jack, meanwhile, was elated when he heard Trish go upstairs to her room. Still, he had to wait for the children to go, but regardless. As Jack waited, the figure in front of his exit shifted occasionally. If she shifted enough, maybe there might be a chance Jack could escape before they left. That would be a great risk, though, especially because their mom walked in and sat on the couch, just adjacent to Jack's position.

To Jack's luck, the little girl finally did move enough to provide him a hole out. Wasting no more time, Jack takes advantage of this opportunity and gets out, immediately making a break for the front door. Does any of the people in the room notice him or does Jack make it outside without any issue?
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