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Rated: GC · Interactive · Adult · #2212566
Our protagonist, Tom, wakes up one morning with powers that he could only dream of!
This choice: Make a noticeable change to Maria and use her as a test subject today.  •  Go Back...
Chapter #7

Make a noticeable change to Maria and use her a...

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"Maria will have longer hair, down to her butt" Tom said.

"That's the best you could come up with?" the voice asked in his head, sounding underwhelmed with Tom's choice.

"Hey man, I'm just starting out. Try to look at this as a trial run", Tom said to the voice as he walked back over toward Maria.

"I'm just saying that you could've done a million other things right now, but it's your world now so do as you please. Look over at your gal's new locks"

Tom looked down at Maria's hair, and seen that it was steadily making it's way down her body, as it almost tripled in length. Her hair was nice before, but she now had a nice long flow of wavy hair that framed her face even better than her previous hairstyle.

"Holy shit! It really does work!" Tom exclaimed, feeling and tugging on Maria's hair to make sure it was real.

"Well no shit Sherlock. Freezing time wasn't enough for you, but turning this girl into Rapunzel was?" the voice echoed in his head.

"I guess I've always been more of a visual learner" Tom joked.

"Regardless of what you are, my work here is done. I just needed to tell you the basics so that you can understand your capabilities. In a few seconds, time will pick back up, and you'll be left to figure the rest out for yourself"

"Sounds good to me! Fire it up!" Tom said, eager to get things rolling again.


The sound of water hitting the floor, and a woman gasping in surprise filled the silence that once was. Time was now flowing again, and the sounds of life had resumed.

"What the hell? Is somebody pulling my h-, oh hey Tom. I thought you were leaving?" Maria said, rubbing the part of her head were Tom was pulling on her hair.

"Wow she felt what I did when we were frozen! I better keep a mental tab on that, for educational purposes" he thought to himself.

"Yeah I was, but I just couldn't pass up on an opportunity like this to hangout with a good friend" Tom said, lying through his teeth.

"You're too sweet Tom. I guess I wouldn't mind hanging out with you for a little while longer" she smiled.

The two of them got to chatting about the classes they were taking this semester, as well as the community surrounding their university. Tom couldn't help but bring his eyes to Maria's new mane that he had bestowed upon her, and how she didn't even nothing the influx of hair on her head.

She eventually caught him staring, and brushed it with her hand, as if she had something in it.

"Is there like a fly or something stuck in my hair dude?" she asked, running her hand through it.

"No! No not at all! It's just a lot longer than what I'm used to seeing it as" he said.

"Haha, well I grew it out since the last time you seen me. I think its this vegan shampoo that I've been using. I could let you borrow some if you're jealous" she giggled.

"Wow! She thinks she's always had hair like that! These powers are really gonna come in handy" Tom noted in his head.

"Medium Kale Smoothie, ready!" the cashier called out, interrupting Tom's train of thought.

"Oop, that's mine! Let me go grab it!"

Maria got up from her seat and walked over to the counter. Tom couldn't help but oogle at Maria's impressive body, as she now had the bust that was on par with her nice rear. He watched as her breasts subtly bounced underneath her jacket, and how her hips rocked side to side with each step she took. He could feel his member waking up from the erotic display in from of him, and his mind begun to fill with ideas.

Not only for ideas about Maria, but some for himself as well. I mean, she'd already gone through and upgraded herself, so why couldn't he do the same? There were plenty of things that he could change about his own look, and with this new power, the opportunities were limitless.



Who gets changed next?

You have the following choices:

1. Tom makes a minor change to Maria

2. Tom makes a minor change to himself

3. Major changes for everybody!

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