This choice: You fly right over the fence into Miss Hilda's yard, landing in her pool. • Go Back...Chapter #5Behind Enemy Lines by: Hectic   Hurdling through the air at supersonic speeds with a large shoe-shaped dent running along your entire torso, you could barely even tell what was up and what was down. You caught a flew glimpses among your hundred of tumbles of Maddie holding both hands over her mouth and staring up at you, but she was getting increasingly further away. As you reached the apex of your flight you finally started to stabilize and looked down to see that you had soared clean over the imposing fence you saw earlier. Thankfully from what you could see you were aimed for a pool as opposed to any other surface which you would have certainly squished flat against. After plummeting for a few seconds you finally landed in the water with a loud splash. You sank beneath the water for a few seconds but thanks to one of the few benefits of being so light and small you quickly rose to the surface.
With your entire chest still caved in from Maddie's cannon of a kick, you didn't quite have control over your body yet. This being the case, you stared up into the blistering mid day sky for a few moments before a surprisingly large shadow was cast over you. Opening your eyes widely you saw the outline of a woman leaning over you from the edge of a pool. Gulping with fear from what little you had heard about Miss Hilda, you tried desperately to get any words out, but with your whole torso still decimated by Maddie your lungs just wouldn't push the air up through your vocal chords quite yet. Suddenly a hand reached down and grabbed your body, shaking some of the water off of you before holding you up to face this mystery woman.
The sight of the woman staring at you inquisitively was bizarre to say the least. First and foremost her body was impressive. While not cut from the same outrageously curvy cloth as the Smalls family, she still had shapely breasts and rather wide hips that led to a large ass that you even begin to see from the front. All this was hidden behind a relatively modest white t-shirt and denim shorts, but nonetheless you could tell she was an attractive woman. However, contrasting the youthful look of her body was a mess of what looked like short hair dyed grey? She had a rather angular, pretty face as well, complemented by a pair of large, circular glasses. If you had to guess you would have said that it seemed like this woman was trying and failing to achieve the mad scientist look, but her natural youth and beauty still won out in the end.
Shaking you out of your trance, the voice of the woman rung out in front of you, "What the hell, is this seriously a doll? All of the Smalls daughters have to be way too old to be playing with dolls at this point. Is that pain in the ass Maddie trying to mess with me or something? I swear that girl needs to stop throwing her shit into my yard!"
You could tell by the tone of her voice that this woman was not a friendly person to be around. The disdain in her voice when she even said the names of the Smalls was evident, and now you felt twice as terrified to be where you were. She quickly dropped her arm down to her side and began to walk briskly towards her house. Swinging you unconsciously as she walked, she bumped your body into the side of her hip multiple times, slamming your still deformed body into her soft skin. You couldn't even take in your surroundings due to the repeated contact you kept making with her, as she quickly walked through her house and out her front door. Stepping out into her front yard she stopped suddenly, holding you still long enough to see none other than Maddie standing a few feet ahead of you both! It seemed like Maddie had ran all the way from the Smalls' backyard up to the front of this Miss Hilda's house as soon as she realized what she had done to you. You smiled at least knowing that the sister of your fiance seemed like she genuinely cared about your well being. But that didn't change the tension in the air at that exact moment. It was clear that Miss Hilda did not like Maddie one bit.
"I'm guessing this is yours, then?" Miss Hilda said, her voice dripping with annoyance.
"Yes I am so sorry it was a complete accident! I'll never even play a sport in my backyard again if you just give it ba..." Maddie pleaded but Miss Hilda cut her off.
"As I told you last time this DOLL or whatever I am holding will not be returning to you! In fact, maybe this will teach you to be more considerate of personal space!" With her final word she threw you aggressively onto the concrete step down in front of her, before immediately raising a large, pale, bare foot above your body. You could only whimper with fear as she brought the ball of her foot down hard onto your face, before immediately lifting it up and repeating the process with the rest of your body. She stomped for nearly ten seconds straight, concluding the beatdown by twisting her heel over your now totally flattened body.
Maddie was speechless at the violent display that her neighbor displayed. She always knew that she was a grumpy woman, but this was outrageous. Shaking herself out of shock she yelled back, "Miss Hilda that isn't a doll that is a real person he has a special condition that makes him that size!"
Now just standing with her foot planted firmly over your entire body, this woman furrowed her brows in curiosity. She removed her foot and peered down at your now completely flattened body. Bits of dirt and other grime from the bottom of her soles had rubbed off all over your body during the stomping, smearing some of your features slightly, but for the most part you still maintained your features. She bent down and used a nail to scrape your head free from the ground, peeling your body up like a human pancake. She took one more look at you and waved your flattened form around before responding.
"Yeah right I'm sure you just said that to get me to give it back. Not a chance! Better think twice before launching something in my yard again, unless you just like giving me gifts!" Miss Hilda then immediately spun around and walked the few steps back into her house. Maddie tried to plead more and chase her to the door, but the woman slammed and locked the front door shut before Maddie could reach. Now holding you in her hands she gave you an inquisitive look once more.
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