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A coastal city where the air is hot, the ocean is cool, and furs of absurd weights live.
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Chapter #6

Yarp!

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The Heavenly Bakery's score on Yarp! was astounding. From well over four hundred reviews, it had a total score of 4.97 stars. This definitely impressed Evan. Flipping through the comments, he found nothing but rave reviews about the store and about how tasty and wonderful everything was. Curious to see if anyone said anything bad about the bakery, Evan filtered the comments to go from least stars to most stars.

To his surprise, there was one (and only one) single star reviewer. The post was somewhat old; it was written over a year ago by someone with the username simonismyothername. It read:

for the love of all that is holy do NOT eat here do NOT work here stay AWAY. I worked at the heavenly bakery a couples years back and saw some MESSED UP stuff. Katie is a PSYCHO and I'm glad I left while I still could! Stay away! Stay far away!

Evan was jarred by the message. He expected to read some compliant about waiting in line too long or their doughnut not having enough sprinkles. Instead, what he read sounded like an incredibly dire warning. The guy might be a total crackpot, but the lion was interested in hearing the specifics of what he saw there. Then again, the post is so old that the guy might not rely. He reasoned he should show that to Katie. She'd get a real laugh out of it.

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1. Reach out to simonismyothername

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2. Show the review to Katie

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