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Where will the next door lead?
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Chapter #3

Yellow

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         After Charles enters into the yellow door, he instantly notices that he appeared on a beautiful, secluded white sand beach. He feels happy now that he listened to the white star deva. But, he sees a brown door not too far from where he's standing.

"No, I'm not suppose to go through that door just yet. The blue one's suppose to be next. I wonder where that door is?" asked Charles curiously.

"Hi, I'm Jonni. Who are you?" said Jonni a litte boy about the age of 9.

"I'm Charles. It's nice to meet you," said Charles wondering where Jonni's parents are.

"I bet you're wondering where my parents are. I'm also stuck here like you are. I live in your neighborhood. I've seen you cutting your grass while you've been home a few times while I was outside in the front yard playing with my friends. I'm happy that I'm here, I've made a sandcastle and found a quarter," said Jonni happily.

"Yes, it's nice here and I'm happy for you. Listen Jonni. We both need to look for the blue door. That's where I was told to go next," said Charles hoping that Jonni will listen to him.

"Yes, I understand. But who told you this?" asked Jonni curiously.

"A white star forest deva. Very interesting he was too. Did you see anything interesting while you've been here Jonni?" asked Charles curiously.

"No, not really. Just that I found a quarter," said Jonni showing Charles the quarter and smiling proudly.

"You should leave that here so your parents don't wonder where that quarter came from," said Charles hoping Jonni will listen and understand him.

"Ok Charles, I will. Darn," said Jonni sadly.

         Charles and Jonni agreed to go with him to search for the blue door. They must have searched for a while because it was starting to get dark. They were hungry. Charles carved a long stick out of a tree branch near by from a forest and made a sphere out of it from what he learned on National Geographic. He then built a fire and they had a large fish for their supper. When they were done they continued searching for the blue door.

"Keep looking Jonni. I know it's exhausting but we have to find it. At least we had something to eat for supper now," said Charles happily.

"Yes, that was good! Thanks Charles!" said Jonni merrily back.

         All of the sudden, after they reached being on top of a slight sand mound, a glowing blue door appeared. Charles was happy and told Jonni to come with him. Jonni came with him and they both went to their next place.

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