Chapter #4Make a bigger change by: DX   Ash had an idea that would change Dawn's life forvever.
"Okay, Dawn, listen up. You no longer want to be a Pokemon Coordinator." Ash told her
"No longer...a...Coordinator..." Dawn droned back
"In fact you no longer want to work with Pokemon."
"No...Pokemon"
"You still care for your team, but over time, as you've mature, you've been progressively growing tired of your Pokemon getting the attention."
"Tired..of Pokemon...attention."
"You want all the eyes in the room to be on you."
"All eyes...on me..."
"In fact, that's why you agreed to come to visit Professor Oak. You want to give all your Pokemon to Ash to look after. You believe I'll take the best care of them."
"Came to Oak...give Ash Pokemon...best care..."
"Now call out all your Pokemon."
The half-naked Dawn went over to her bag to grab her Pokeballs, summoning her team. Ash turned his attention to them, using the pendant to hypnotize them as well.
"Okay guys, why you still care about Dawn, you've felt her growing more distant from you over time. You want what's best for her and if that's leaving you behind, you're okay with that. If she were to give you to me, you'd be excited for it."
All six pokemon nodded in unison, making some droning sounds as they did.
"Alright everyone, Dawn this includes you too," Ash continued, "You won't feel these changes take hold right away. You'll start to feel them on your way over to Oaks. However, like I said, you'll feel that these feelings have been there for a while, they're just coming to a head now. Even if you leave here with the knowledge that I hypnotized you, you won't believe these feelings are related to hypnosis or find anything odd about them. No matter what Professor Oak has to tell you, you won't leave without transferring your Pokemon to me, you're mind will have been made up by then."
The seven nodded dreamily.
"Okay Dawn, recall your team and put them back away like they were. To all Pokemon, you'll snap out of your trance as soon as you're in your Pokeballs and carry out your orders."
Dawn called back her team and put the balls back in her bag. With that done...   indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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