This choice: Wait till tomorrow to talk to Weiss again. • Go Back...Chapter #4Wait till tomorrow to talk to Weiss again. by: turtleguru   Over night Jaune had time to think about why his hypnosis worked the way it did. Weiss was certainly happy to be his but she ignored two of his commands. Maybe he didn't say it in the right tone? Or perhaps it was her emotional state? Jaune was going to get to the bottom of it one way or another.
The next day Jaune got Weiss alone in the JNPR room.
"Weiss, I think we need to talk about yesterday."
"I had a great time, learning what I am meant to be." Weiss responded
"You know what I mean."
Weiss looked down. "Yes, I'd like to apologize for my... unprofessional behavior."
"It makes me wonder how loyal you actually are."
Weiss was taken aback "I-I'm very loyal! I'm more loyal than even your own mother would be!"
"I'm just going to ignore your choice of comparison there, Weiss. You say that you'll do whatever I tell you, and you clearly place value on following my orders."
Weiss took a breath. "Are you going to say 'but'?"
"Yes I am. Weiss, I intended the hypnosis to make you have no real will of your own, but you have involuntary reactions that I don't control."
"I can be better-"
"Weiss!" Jaune snapped. Weiss jumped.
Jaune continued "I know I made you want to serve me, but I don't think I made you incapable of disobeying me."
"I don't... I'll do anything for you Master. I can prove it."
"Strip."
"Wha-" Weiss blushed hard, eyes widened in shock at the vulgar request.
"See? You want to serve me but it's not ingrained at the level of you following orders automatically."
"I can...hmm...I can strip if you really need me too..." Weiss said in a quiet voice averting her gaze.
"Do it then."
"Yes master." Weiss said quietly. She slowly started with her shoes and socks, and made her way to her shirt. She unbuttoned it with a nervouse look on her face and let it fall off her. She reached down and took off her skirt, not looking directly at Jaune while doing so.
"See? I am more than willing to do anything you need me to do." Weiss said, embarest but still proud that she did right by her master.
"Yes, but you hesitated and you stopped at the underwear."
Weiss let out a "HM" at more criticism from Jaune. 'Oh no. Master is displeased.' She frantically thought to herself 'What's wrong with me? Am I broken? Did he fail at hypnotizing me completely? Did I just think this could be Master Jaune's fault!?'
"Weiss, you need to remember to breath." Jaune said, exasperated.
Weiss upon noticing that she wasn't breathing gasped for air. She looked at Jaune sadly and said "I'm sorry, that I couldn't succeed in the task you assigned me."
"That's fine. I think this might be a more fun work around than having you just be a robot anyway. I could hypnotize you again later if I get bored of it. For now we should start planning on how I'm going to hypnotize some more girls. Make me a sandwich and we can get started."
Weiss was nearly overjoyed to hear she wasn't a failure from Jaune. With a new smile on her face she excitedly exclaimed "Yes Master! Should I get redressed?"
"No, your sexy and I like the view."
"oh...Of course Master." Weiss, still uncomfortable, went to the kitchen.
When she returned with the best sandwich she could make, Jaune had a list of names written down.
"Your sandwich master." Weiss said placing the plate in front of Jaune.
"Thank you, Weiss." He took a bite. "It's good."
"I live to please" Weiss answered gleefully.
"Now, my next hypnosis target" Jaune said "Will be your best friend, Ruby."
"She's not my best friend."
"Then who is?"
Weiss opened her mouth to answer, then closed it when she realized that she didn't have an answer.
"Oh" Weiss said. "oh no."
"Anyway, seeing as how she likes you it shouldn't be too hard to get her to come to me for hypnosis. Weiss?"
Weiss was staring off into the distance. 'How did this happen?' She thought to herself.
Jaune sighed and took another bite out of his sandwich. 'This could be a long day.' he thought 'At least I can wonder what Ruby will be like post hypnosis, seeing as Weiss is much different,'
Jaune loudly clapped to get Weiss' attention. "As I was saying" He began "Get her to come with you to be hypnotized by me. She likes you, it won't be hard."
Weiss, embarrassed now not only by her state of dress but because Jaune had to recapture her attention gave a quick "Yes Master." and asked when they'll start the plan.  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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