This choice: Time for some punishment, down the ogre gullet • Go Back...Chapter #5Time for some punishment, down the ogre gullet by: crossblade   The ogress is so massive, she’s looming over Dave in a single long stride, completely covering the much smaller boy in her shadow! He looked up at her, quickly realizing the sort of mistake he just made… but it was too late! Soon, one of her massive, stubby hands was wrapped around his torso, and he quickly gasped as he realized just how incomprehensibly strong she was in comparison to him! “Shouldn’t have said that, kid… but you were going to have to learn this lesson sooner or later. Might as well happen now. Down the hatch!” She shrugs, nonchalantly.
You can only watch as the massive, bulky woman stuffs your little brother straight into her mouth in a single movement, closing her lips around him to seal him away completely in darkness. You immediately felt sorry for him. Her breath was foul enough all the way from over here. You can’t IMAGINE how disgusting it must be to be trapped entirely inside her mouth, with only her atrocious breath to breathe, as he’s completely covered from head to toe in her disgusting, meaty slobber!
You watch in awe and horror as she starts rolling him around in her mouth with her tongue, pressing him up against her cheeks as she teaches him a lesson. Eventually, you see two hands poke through her lips… and you catch a glimpse of David’s terrified face as he manages to pry her lips apart a bit! “Please! Let me go! It’s disgus-” Before he can choke out another word, she angrily pressed a finger against his forehead, and pushed him back into her mouth! She crossed her arms, a disapproving expression on her face as she keeps pushing him around with her tongue.
Meanwhile, Dave has found himself in some sort of nightmare! There’s basically any room to move in her mouth, and any time he manages to get a grip on something, her powerful tongue pushes him around, smothering him against her cheek or pressing his face into a puddle of disgusting slobber. He was completely covered in drool, and he gagged every single time he was hit with her garbage bin-like breath. He couldn’t tell which way was up and which way was down! He was fully at her mercy! All he could do was try desperately from getting too close to that cavernous throat at the back of her maw…
It seems like she torments him in her mouth forever… but eventually, it comes to an end. Instead of spitting him out, though… your head drops as you hear a loud gulp, and the bulge in her cheeks disappeared, replaced with a similarly sized bulge in her throat! You hold a hand over your mouth, shaking as you can see a clear imprint of your body’s struggling form in her neck before it disappeared behind her ginormous chest. She let's out a satisfied belch, patting her gut with a hand as she feels the boy land in her stomach proper.
Shock and horror are running through your veins as you stare at her big, round potbelly. It was already so big, your brother didn’t even make a bulge! You wouldn’t even believe he was really in there if you hadn’t just seen her swallow him with your own eyes! “Oh! That really hit the spot!” She smiled, patting her gut, seemingly amused by the horrified expression on your face. She’s made her point clear - now you knew what happened to any bratty kids who found themselves under her care.
“You… you ate him…” You stuttered, never witnessing such a sight in your life. Not only did she eat him, but she swallowed him… whole! And with complete ease, too, like your brother was just some bite-sized snack!
“Why, yes I did! And I’ve still got plenty of room in here,” she smirked, poking her belly and making it obvious you could join him in there. “So while you’re under my care, I expect you to be in tip-top shape! Capiche?” You nod eagerly, horrified at the thought of ending up inside her huge, gurgling gut. Even now, you were fighting back tears, thinking that was the last time you’ll ever see your brother again. “Good boy! Now, your brother, on the other hand, deserves a time-out, I think. How about an hour?” She says, walking over and lounging on the couch, which creaks beneath her weight.
You blink, a little confused. What did she mean, a ‘time-out’? “So, you’re not going to digest him?” You sheepishly ask, your voice almost a whisper.
She gives you a weird look. “What? No! Of course not. Why would I?” She says, as if that much was obvious. “I may be a little ‘intimidating’, but I ain’t a monster! Well… okay, I AM a monster, but not a MONSTER monster.” She pats her gut. “I just believe in good ol’ fashioned tough love, just like how all ogres raise their kids! So many human children are far too spoiled and bratty nowadays. Their parents go so easy on ‘em!” You stare down at her big pot-belly, still stunned by the knowledge your brother is inside. At least he wasn’t being digested… but it still must be unbelievably DISGUSTING in there! The ogress’ body was nasty enough on the outside… you couldn’t even imagine what it was like on the inside!
Of course, you kept this to yourself, trying to avoid staring at her tummy too much. Eventually, she glanced at you. “You seem like a good lad, though. Tell me; what sorta things do you like to do for fun?”  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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