This choice: A Brazilian woman, holding what looked like a dog collar • Go Back... The woman who enters the room before you doesn't appear to look like a scientist. She is an absolute goddess. She stands tall, a little taller than you in fact, wearing long black stilletto boots, and a tight fitting black dress that is barely covered by a silver leather jacket. She takes the jacket off and and rubs a hand to your cheek. "My name is Sophia. You are my partner today, yes?" Her thick brazillian accent immediately sends shivers down your spine and you don't even respond orally, just nod up and down slowly. She smiles and says "Excellent. Then we can begin right away. Hold still, please." She walks behind you and rubs her hand on your shoulder in a very sensuous, almost massage-like fashion. It distracts you completely from what she's about to do as you look ahead calmly, allowing her to slap what feels like a thick metal brace completely around your neck. In your shock and panic, you feel it snap shut closed, and immediately upon locking, you feel the device pulsing what feels like a steady current through your entire body. You scream in anger "Ah! What was that you bi..." And before you can finish it, the woman points at you and shouts "Be silent!" You try and scream at her, but the current continues to pulse into your vocal chords, rendering them useless. You find it impossible to raise your voice above even the faintest whisper. A wicked grin crosses Sophia's face and she claps her hands to herself saying "Excellent. It works even faster than expected."
You ask with a hoarse voice slowly returning to you what the device is and she just laughs and continues pacing around you. "This is new invention. Developed by scientists over past few years. It was supposed to trick the mind into answering questions immediately, almost like lie detector. Could be very useful in interrogation." She traces a finger up the length of your chest and says "Tell me. This excites you, no?" You can not help but feel a bit excited by the control she has over you, but you'd never say that out loud to someone you just met. That is, if this device weren't forcing your lips to say "Absolutely." Damn it, it really works! She walks back around you and says "However, we find the device works a little TOO well. It doesn't just make the person wearing it tell the truth. If they are addressed in the form of a command, it forces their body to obey the demand without any sort of hesitation. No matter how strange. Jump!" You immediately feel your feet leave the ground as your body jumps without your mind telling it to. "Kneel." You drop to your knees in front of the already statuesque woman, making her appear a few feet taller. She holds out a hand to you, extending her fingers and says "Kiss." You grab her hand and lay a peck upon her skin, much like a grateful slave would do to a kind and caring master. She laughs at your subordination and says "This is most perfect tool for submission. Anything i ask you to do, you will do for me. Because the device not only controls your mind. It allows me to reshape your body into anything i desire." She stands tall and points at you saying "And to prove it to you, i command you to..."  indicates the next chapter needs to be written. |
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