Yea this one actually did what it suggests
Unfortunately I felt it was rushed and short
Anyway the premise is Aliens who
Kevin and Krypto befriended in an earlier ep
come to visit
They’re smaller than humans so they
use their ships size ray to turn human sized
As they visit with Kevin his sister
Melanie plays with the tiny ship and
zaps herself by accident
Enlarging Melanie to 50 feet tall
She keeps the ship thinking it’s a toy
and she plays with things causing choas.
Eventually they succeed in tricking her
to give back the ship and shrink her before
Kevin’s mom finds out.
I have 3 proposed alterations
Idea 1 -
What if their trickery backfires?
They get the ship back but
accidentally enlarge Melanie even more and
worse the ship is damaged?
Idea 2 -
Kids including Melanie in at least one instance
of fighting with Krypto and Kevin
can be self centered.
What if when they try to trick Melanie
that manifests.
They want the ship. She says
“NO MINE” and because she likes being
big Melanie zaps herself even bigger
Growing from 50 feet to say
120, 180 or more. Maybe Melanie will
even grow again
Idea 3 -
Yea so this is kind of a copypasta from the
previous episode idea but
has the the potential to go a little different
given the circumstances and cause.
What if the Alien size ray wasn’t meant
for use on humans much less children.
Melanie zaps herself and grows but in the
shock breaks the ship.
Melanie has her fun after growing 50 feet tall
but there’s a problem a side effect
After awhile
Melanie grows to 100 feet tall next
she has more fun but again after some time
grows to 200 feet
The aliens figure out or at least theorize
something as Kevin and Krypto ask worry
and wonder will Melanie keep growing.
They theorize yes as Melanie grows again
to 300 feet and the aliens hope they can
rebuild the ship and the ray
Meanwhile Melanie plays and explores
and occasionally grows unaware of the
choas her situation brings
Next 400 then 600
Worse her spurts are getting bigger and
Kevin’s mom finds out naturally as they
worry and race the clock while
Krypto and Scratchy use their powers to
try and minimize damage and contain
The growing Mega Melanie
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