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Chapter #64Madi's torturous reason for becoming a succubus by: thegreatrizzo   “Because of what I read. The reports and diaries at that time mentioned that those who visited the coven where the witches were came back exhausted or never at all.” Nick moved forward to emphasize his point. “Salem heard that the women there seemed to be otherworldly. When it was determined that they were using dark magic and desired to rule the world. A religious organization stepped in to save the world.”
“So that is where you get your opinions about demons?” You inquired. This was the image that Nick had.
“Yep. The description from the battle described women with wings and animalistic parts that were devastating people left and right on the field. They were terrified.” Nick’s fear was starting to creep back up.
“The women were terrified too. Their home was about to be destroyed for little reason.” Sarah decided to enlighten Nick about her family’s side. “Imagine building a family on your little section of the world and someone obliterates it because you are different. Totally not justified.”
“What do you mean?”
“The coven was made up of women who were marginalized in society. They lived outside of where everyone else was. Criella, the first one with the blood, gave the women power and sought to create a family for herself. A few men joined as husbands for some of the women but mostly it was men coming just to have a pleasurable night. The women wouldn’t bow to those sorts of men so they stirred up trouble. That is what my Mom told me.” Sarah gave Nick a brief glimpse of the history that she had been told about her ancestry.
“So you can’t believe everything you read on the internet.” Madi chimed in. She was sitting right next to Nick, who finally realized that she had been inching towards him. “You could get the wrong impression of someone.”
Nick was still a bit hesitant. He was calmer. “I can see that I can be wrong in my assumptions. It's just I have a nagging sense. What if you're wrong about your family’s history?”
“If my family’s history is wrong then my Criella was evil. It doesn’t reflect who I am. I want to be good. I don’t desire to rule the world. I just want to spend my days happy with my Dweeb.” She reached over and hugged you. You hugged her back. You wanted to be close to this big girl. “I don’t think what my Mom told me is wrong, since I trust her.”
Squeezing Sarah tighter, she giggled. I was very happy in that embrace. “And I trust Sarah. She has done any life sucking or soul eating of me. She had plenty of time to if she wanted.” You added to Sarah’s words.
“And you trust our Dweeb?” Madi asked Nick. she was bringing the pressure on him.
“Yes yes.” Nick raised his hands as he signaled that he gave up. He was going to accept succubus. “I trust our Dweeb. He hasn’t been taken over or dead. I can trust Sarah.” He then shifted his attention to Madi. “I can’t trust you though.” This turned Madi into a deep blue. “How did you become this and why? Why didn’t you tell us about this?”
“I’m wondering that too.” Chad returned back into the conversation. “I think that is the biggest question left.
Madi cupped her hands and moved her tail out of the way. She seemed very sad as she spoke. “Well, I guess you all deserve to know. I’m sorry that I have been hiding this from you. It started a while back. It starts with my brothers, Seth and Zane, and the biology teacher, Mr. Davis.”
The group spent the next several minutes hearing Madi’s story involving her brothers, the blackmail, the transformational opportunity, and her revenge. Nick and Chad were riveted by what Madi had to bear. Nick’s attitude completely changed from scared to angry. Angry at the horror that she had to live through.
Nick stood up with a fury at himself. “I’m a fucking idiot.” He stomped around “why didn’t I see that you were trouble? I could have tried to help. I’m a fucking bad friend.” Nick moped along in the room.
“It is not your fault.” Madi answered. “The man was a monster. I had to protect you all while doing the same for my family. I had to be good at hiding it.”
“That is still no excuse for me. You were imprisoned by a true rat king and I ignored all possible signs of it. You could have bore his fucking child.” Nick pointed out while boiling in his emotions. You shivered at that notion.
“We are all very upset about this. Especially at the baby part that I think about it more.” Chad spoke up. He was mad too but he kept his emotions in check more than Nick. “If we did figure it out, what could we have done?”
Nick was getting very exaggerated. “Let me videotape him in the act, record his crimes, or something. I am a blogger. I could have blown that story up and gotten him locked up. We could have done that.”
“Then everyone and their family’s secrets could be exposed to everyone, even the dark web.” Madi countered. She stood up to meet him. Nick didn’t flinch at all with Madi coming next to him. His fear of demoness was gone since hearing Madi’s story. “He would find out the secrets they would want to hide to the grave. Do you know all the secrets of your family? Could you protect them?”
Nick remained silent for that. He was desperately searching for an answer. When he got one, “What about having Sarah do it? She is a succubus. She could have gotten his soul.”
“Sarah would have been a red flag. He would have been seriously cautious of a girl who would have gone straight up to him looking like Sarah and wanting to have some alone time. He makes sure he has the dirt first and no way that you could catch him. Madi would suffer longer while trying to get it to work.” You gave your reasoning of why Sarah couldn’t have taken Mr. Davis’s soul.
Sarah followed. “I would have loved to have taken his soul if it meant saving Madi and other women like her but I couldn’t. I would only be able to get close enough to him to charm him. I wouldn’t be able to deal with him from a distance effectively. I wouldn’t know where to begin if I tried to in his dream. Men buried in secrets like him have surprisingly, unconsciously built up barriers that raises the difficulty of soul snatching in dreams. That is what my Uncle Joe has told me.” This is something new to you. This was an unforeseen obstacle that could have hindered that direction if taken. You were glad that the molester didn’t have as many secrets as Mr. Davis.
“Just like the movie, Inception.” Chad gave a reference.
“What’s Inception?” Sarah asked curiously.
“A movie about dreams. It ripped off an anime.” Chad answered. He then pushed that tangent away. “But let us return to the topic at hand.”
Nick’s anger was switching over to hopelessness. “Was there no other way?”
“There was but a lot of girls could have been hurt during the time that it would take. I had to become a succubus.” Madi stated. “He had another woman lined up after me. I saved her from further misery.” Madi was holding Nick’s hand. He was blushing as she did. She was getting closer to him. “Besides, I like this body.” Madi flickered orange as she moved to tease Nick with her larger body.
“I can’t say I agree with the choice but I will accept it.” Chad slapped his legs as he stood up. “A bunch of girls are going to sleep easier and I can’t fight against that. We will live with Twigs being a succubus from now on.”
Madi rotated her head to Chad. “Thank you, Baker.”
“I agree. We can’t change the past but we can live with what we got. We will make the best of it.” Nick concurred. That was swiftly followed by Madi hugging him. He was forced directly against Madi's body. You could see him struggle to free himself but Madi’s muscles were not for show as Nick could escape. She was a magenta color. You had no idea what that meant. Nick gasped as she let go of him.
“Thank you, that means so much to me.”
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